Snapshots
Naomi Krupitsky Wernham 4th period
1.
The girl was dead. She had been dead for about an hour. Her hair was dark and
fanned around her head. Her eyes were closed, but her mouth was stretched in a
horrified grimace. She was dead, and she wasn’t moving. She was skinny and
wearing a t-shirt and jeans. The t-shirt was green and thin, and her arms looked
like pale toothpicks, splayed across the still-warm asphalt.
The boy was sitting on a bench near the girl. He was looking at her closed eyes.
He was crying. His breath hiccupped and shook, and tears rolled down his face in
time with his crying. Sometimes his tears paused on their journey, caught up by
the miniscule crannies in his skin. Dark spots littered his lap from where his
tears had dropped, silently.
The boy was wringing his hands as he cried. They swooped over under over under
over under over under over under over under over under over under over under
over under over under over under over under over under over under over under
over under over under over under in a frenzied dance that kept time with the
tears and the hiccupping sobbing noises. His hands were pale and soft, but the
nails were brittle and cracked and his cuticles were destroyed – small scabs
punctuated the corners of his nails and the nails themselves were oblong nubs,
mutilated by anxious tooth marks.
The girl was dead, and the boy was sitting on a bench nearby, watching her.
The sun was low in the sky. It hugged the horizon, one edge threatening to dip
below. The wavering autumn light danced through trees, turning yelloworangered
leaves slightly different shades of mottled fall technicolor.
Under the relentlessly shifting shadow of one of those yelloworangered trees,
the girl lay, dead, and the boy sat on a bench, looking at her through
tear-glazed eyes and a puffy face. Her skin seemed to darken in the growing
shadow and the boy strained through dampsquinting eyes, peering into the evening
as the nuances and details of her face were blurred by darkness. She was
rendered anonymous and the boy sobbed incrementally louder for every one of her
features hidden by the coming night.
A deep red trickle was winding its way from her head down through asphalt
irregularities; eventually, it met with the skin of her right arm and pooled
there, staining the edge of her t-shirt as the blood seeped into the green
cotton threads.
She was dead and the boy saw her and while he watched the blood pooling and the
dusk erasing her features he wrung his hands rhythmically and tears squeezed
themselves out of his swollentired eyes. The air was rusty with early fall and
the only sound, now that the birds had been scared off, came from the boy’s
choked, sniffling misery.
The axe between them glistened in the setting sun.
2.
The girl was dancing. She had been dancing for hours. Her hair was dark and
fanned around her head. Her eyes were half-open and her mouth slack; her
toothpick arms swung as the music thundered; there was a faint sweat-stain
forming on her back as her shirt glued itself to her sticky skin.
The boy stared at the girl with brown eyes that were round and soft
around the edges. He kept one foot placed slightly in front of the other, as if
he were preparing to approach her, and every so often his jaw clenched and a
tremor went through his otherwise still body as if he couldn’t force himself to
move from the spot onto which he appeared to be frozen.
The girls stared and the boy watched and her shirt fluttered with frantic
breathing and the walls seemed to slide inward, closing in on the boy and the
girl and the suffocating, dusty light.
The boy saw the girl. He turned and began to swim through a sea of
throbbing bodies, winding around the interlocked limbs of couples and the
free-flying hands and feet of those for whom dancing was a solitary activity.
Fingers and elbows landed across his face, shoulders, chest, arms, as he
shuffled in the girl’s direction. Someone stumbled, laughing, and instinctually
grabbed at the boy’s shirt. Strobe lights flashed across his face, momentarily
illuminating them both and then, just as suddenly, leaving them in darkness that
was only penetrated by the music’s baseline and the shuffling of feet.
The boy kept walking.
The room was dark save for the sporadic flashing of strobe lights that wavered
over the undulating crowd. It was full-packed and suffocatingly hot and the
throngs of people moved in time to the music that pounded so loudly it bypassed
their ears and went soul-deep, lightning quick in jolts through their heads to
the vibrating floor. The people moved as if they were one entity, swaying and
dipping, swooping and grinding in the ecstatic chaos of released energy.
The boy kept scanning the dance floor, winding slowly but surely towards the
girl, who was dancing. He was an ant, distracted by nothing, drawn solely by the
scented trail left for him.
A disco ball on the ceiling turned lazily and spit multicolored drops of
light onto the people below. Those who had their eyes open could see, in the
half-seconds when strobes flashed, the sweat drops flying, mingling in the
already humid air, and the hair swooshing in convoluted orbits around the heads
of people who had abandoned themselves to beat and rhythm, oblivious.
The girl was looking at the boy. Her eyes caught his as he scanned the
crowd. The girl had been dancing, limbs and hair flying, but she saw the boy,
and she stopped.
The people were moving and the music was playing and the air was palpably
sot and sticky and the girl was looking at the boy as he crossed the dance floor
and her mouth was open and her eyes were wide and her once-swinging arms lay
limply at her sides and her feet began to shuffle robotically toward the boy.
3.
The girl was staring into the mirror. She had been staring for as long as
the boy had been watching her – five minutes, maybe ten. Maybe more. She was
standing and gripping the edges of the sink with both hands and staring into the
mirror with piercing eyes the color of celery and a thin cotton shirt that
matched them and the boy was standing a few paces behind her, watching silently.
The girl wasn’t blinking. Her eyes only flickered slightly, scanning her
reflection, and her mouth twitched periodically, and her nostrils flared with
heavy breathing, but her eyes remained open and her gaze steady, bright celery
green and steady.
Each of her hands held an edge of the sink in an iron grip. Her knuckles
were white with the pressure of skin against porcelain and her fingernail beds
were tomato-red at the base and occasionally she shifted her fingers, changed
her grip slightly to a new, equally vice-like grip on the dirty white edge.
She drew deep, fast, ragged breaths that caused the green cotton t-shirt
to rise and fall, rise and fall, rise and fall, frenziedly rising and falling as
she sucked air into her panicked lungs and the boy stood watching.
A jagged crack ran down the mirror, mildew climbing out of its edges and
traversing the reflection of the girl’s collarbone. The sink had once been
white, but was covered in streaks of dirt and grime. The walls, too, had been
white once, although brownish-yellow water stains had since leaked from an
unidentifiable source and spread in abstract, grotesque shapes down the peeling
white paint. Worn and split linoleum covered most of the floor. It had been
ripped away from the walls in places to reveal years’ worth of accumulated dust
and partially decomposed bugs. Light streamed through a window that was clouded
with dirt and age and illuminated suspended particles of dust, hovering in the
musty air. The light was reflected in the mirror and multiplied by the mirror’s
pockmarked irregularities into a million little dots of shimmering light on the
weathered walls.
The boy stared at the girl with brown eyes that were round and soft
around the edges. He kept one foot placed slightly in front of the other, as if
he were preparing to approach her, and every so often his jaw clenched and a
tremor went through his otherwise still body as if he couldn’t force himself to
move from the spot onto which he appeared to be frozen.
The girls stared and the boy watched and her shirt fluttered with frantic
breathing and the walls seemed to slide inward, closing in on the boy and the
girl and the suffocating, dusty light.
The sun was hanging in the sky as the limbo between afternoon and evening
grew heavy. The light coming in the window of the room where the girl was
staring and the boy was watching would soon be thicker, weighted with the day’s
imminent end.
Outside the room, light glistened and shined on the blade of a recently
sharpened axe.